| | | Not sure if I can shorten it.... | Mar 2024 | Pat | 2 | 18 | Thu Mar 21, 2024 6:56 pm by Pat |
| | | Her Children Took Her Car Keys Away | Feb 2024 | Pat | 7 | 41 | Thu Feb 29, 2024 2:33 pm by Pat |
| | | Not sure of the title yet... it's for a granddaughter | Nov 2023 | Pat | 5 | 50 | Thu Nov 30, 2023 9:40 pm by Pat |
| | | And now, dilated eyes, but I'm pasting this....check tomorrow. | Oct 2023 | Pat | 2 | 25 | Wed Nov 01, 2023 4:22 pm by Pat |
| | | I'm editing a Letting Go book of poems | Sep 2023 | Pat | 6 | 63 | Sun Oct 15, 2023 2:12 pm by Pat |
| | | I sent a poem, but it's not here. | Aug 2023 | Pat | 4 | 54 | Fri Aug 25, 2023 12:29 pm by Pat |
| | | Struggle, struggle.... ode to influential poet | Jul 2023 | Pat | 4 | 46 | Fri Jul 28, 2023 7:38 am by Pat |
| | | Can you follow this? It's an old story, so... | Jun 2023 | Pat | 2 | 56 | Fri Jun 30, 2023 2:12 pm by Pat |
| | | Trying to make it compact without losing my hotness... | May 2023 | Pat | 5 | 80 | Sat May 27, 2023 8:17 pm by renee.barger |
| | | I don't know about the closure... it's about Charles Stanley. | Apr 2023 | Pat | 1 | 37 | Sat Apr 29, 2023 3:36 pm by tsukany |
| | | I need your eyes and ears on this one... | Mar 2023 | Pat | 2 | 41 | Fri Mar 31, 2023 11:37 am by Pat |
| | | I keep reworking it. Help me.... | Feb 2023 | Pat | 4 | 90 | Wed Feb 22, 2023 8:28 am by Pat |
| | | Father and Daughter | Jan 2023 | Pat | 2 | 43 | Sat Jan 28, 2023 4:33 pm by Pat |
| | | Before Thanksgiving Day | Nov 22 | Pat | 2 | 38 | Sat Nov 26, 2022 3:22 pm by Pat |
| | | Raw and new poem | Oct 22 | Pat | 3 | 73 | Mon Oct 31, 2022 3:37 pm by Pat |
| | | I'm always struggling to not tell too much and report what I see.... | Sep 22 | Pat | 2 | 60 | Wed Oct 19, 2022 7:44 pm by Sarah Anne |
| | | Great suggestions. | Sep 22 | Pat | 3 | 55 | Sat Oct 01, 2022 3:55 pm by Pat |
| | | Aging...need feedback on your understanding... | Aug 22 | Pat | 12 | 111 | Sun Aug 28, 2022 7:40 pm by Pat |
| | | Wednesday.... | Jul 22 | Pat | 5 | 40 | Fri Jul 29, 2022 6:40 pm by Pat |
| | | History is accurate, now the poetics | Jun 22 | Pat | 23 | 134 | Thu Jul 21, 2022 3:06 pm by Pat |
| | | Trying to keep myself OUT of the poem...but the mental is what fascinates me. | May 22 | Pat | 6 | 69 | Thu Jun 02, 2022 8:13 am by Pat |
| | | The Daffodils | Apr 22 | Pat | 6 | 96 | Sat May 14, 2022 9:30 am by renee.barger |
| | | Watching the story unfold.... | Mar 22 | Pat | 7 | 70 | Fri Mar 25, 2022 2:24 pm by Pat |
| | | Title? I don't know.... last line: melt or melted??? melting? | Feb 22 | Pat | 13 | 115 | Thu Mar 24, 2022 12:54 pm by renee.barger |
| | | Struggling to get this to Send.... | Jan 22 | Pat | 4 | 67 | Fri Feb 18, 2022 3:28 pm by Pat |
| | | I have edited this poem for 2 or 3 weeks.... I keep changing it... | Dec 21 | Pat | 4 | 85 | Mon Dec 27, 2021 10:18 am by Pat |
| | | A poem of a different sort for me.... | Nov 21 | Pat | 4 | 54 | Fri Nov 26, 2021 11:45 am by Pat |
| | | I have been working on this for 2 weeks. | Oct 21 | Pat | 5 | 56 | Thu Oct 28, 2021 2:55 pm by tsukany |
| | | I don't know if there's hope for this poem or not. Needs help. | Sep 21 | Pat | 7 | 89 | Sun Sep 26, 2021 9:27 am by Pat |
| | | Different... trying to keep it simple and short. Adjectives vs nouns. | Aug 21 | Pat | 6 | 57 | Sat Aug 28, 2021 10:11 pm by Pat |
| | | This happened over the weekend (neighbors) | Jul 21 | Pat | 10 | 114 | Mon Aug 09, 2021 4:45 pm by Pat |
| | | Washing the Truck | Jun 21 | Pat | 11 | 144 | Mon Jul 05, 2021 7:09 pm by renee.barger |
| | | Momentary Halt | May 21 | Pat | 2 | 46 | Sun May 30, 2021 2:37 pm by Pat |
| | | I Promised | Apr 21 | Pat | 6 | 191 | Tue Apr 27, 2021 7:10 pm by Pat |
| | | List poem. Trying to show frustrations and end with hope. | Mar 21 | Pat | 7 | 90 | Thu Mar 25, 2021 7:34 pm by Pat |
| | | I read the article. | Feb 21 | Pat | 0 | 55 | Tue Mar 02, 2021 9:20 am by Pat |
| | | Haven't actually been to a movie house in so long. We do this at home, too with movies. | Dec 20 | Pat | 2 | 56 | Fri Dec 25, 2020 6:01 pm by Pat |
| | | Shooting for lightness in a recovery room | Nov 20 | Pat | 6 | 83 | Tue Dec 01, 2020 7:41 am by Pat |
| | | Very short for me... | Oct 20 | Pat | 15 | 151 | Tue Nov 10, 2020 5:09 pm by renee.barger |
| | | Protests Are Gentle | Aug 20 | Pat | 8 | 178 | Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:38 am by Pat |
| | | Closure? I've changed it 5 times.. | Sep 20 | Pat | 8 | 178 | Thu Oct 08, 2020 11:38 am by renee.barger |
| | | Wondering if you can accept the last line. | Jul 20 | Pat | 9 | 228 | Fri Aug 07, 2020 8:40 am by Pat |
| | | The Girl Wants Something Else | Jun 20 | Pat | 13 | 271 | Fri Jul 03, 2020 10:11 am by Pat |
| | | Letting things go | May 20 | Pat | 6 | 226 | Wed Jun 17, 2020 10:15 am by renee.barger |
| | | It Does Matter | Apr 20 | Pat | 11 | 373 | Sat May 09, 2020 3:24 pm by Pat |
| | | Talking to God | Mar 20 | Pat | 5 | 233 | Sun Mar 29, 2020 4:33 pm by Pat |
| | | Bawling Cow | Feb 20 | Pat | 4 | 256 | Tue Feb 25, 2020 9:45 pm by renee.barger |
| | | Sciatic Nerve Poem | Jan 20 | Pat | 13 | 292 | Sun Feb 09, 2020 2:22 pm by Pat |
| | | Civil War Women | Dec 19 | Pat | 6 | 391 | Thu Jan 02, 2020 9:16 am by Pat |
| | | forgiveness, a choice | Nov 19 | Pat | 3 | 206 | Sun Nov 24, 2019 3:38 pm by renee.barger |