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On the Stairs

Post  Don C on Thu Oct 24, 2013 10:09 am

Why am I here?
            Going up?
            Coming Down?
            Resting?
            That’s life.     
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Post  tsukany on Thu Oct 24, 2013 1:15 pm

Nicely done Don.  Thanks for sharing.
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Post  Don C on Thu Oct 24, 2013 8:32 pm

Thanks, Todd

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Is it really life?

Post  dennis20 on Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:28 pm

Don,  Your brevity exacts no comment.

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Where did I hear the saying,

Post  Pat on Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:48 am

short and sweet and hard to beat?   : )   Good, good, good.  I have to do haikus to get a short one.  This is a great model for me.  Thanks,  Pat

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Post  Dewell H. Byrd on Wed Oct 30, 2013 11:31 am

I think you said it all, Don.  You might have slathered a lot more words in there describing each landing but you got it all as is.  Isn't there a Journal called BREVITY?  Consider offering this poem for publication.  Nicely don.  Dewell

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