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    On the Stairs

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    Don C

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    Join date : 2013-09-24

    On the Stairs

    Post  Don C on Thu Oct 24, 2013 10:09 am

    Why am I here?
                Going up?
                Coming Down?
                Resting?
                That’s life.     
    Don Crowson  Oct. 20, 2013
     
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    tsukany

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    Fun

    Post  tsukany on Thu Oct 24, 2013 1:15 pm

    Nicely done Don.  Thanks for sharing.

    Don C

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    On the Stairs

    Post  Don C on Thu Oct 24, 2013 8:32 pm

    Thanks, Todd

    dennis20
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    Is it really life?

    Post  dennis20 on Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:28 pm

    Don,  Your brevity exacts no comment.

    Pat

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    Where did I hear the saying,

    Post  Pat on Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:48 am

    short and sweet and hard to beat?   : )   Good, good, good.  I have to do haikus to get a short one.  This is a great model for me.  Thanks,  Pat

    Dewell H. Byrd

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    On The Stairs...

    Post  Dewell H. Byrd on Wed Oct 30, 2013 11:31 am

    I think you said it all, Don.  You might have slathered a lot more words in there describing each landing but you got it all as is.  Isn't there a Journal called BREVITY?  Consider offering this poem for publication.  Nicely don.  Dewell

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