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Post  Admin on Sat May 21, 2011 6:24 am

Yellow Poems

Roses are red
cliches are weaketh
The Last Friday poems’
due on the 27th

--Todd

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Re: Yellow Rose

Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:08 am

Todd...I'm not sure that your rhyme scheme is very healthy. However, you are brilliant.
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Yellow Poems

Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:10 am

Yellow Poems

Roses are red
cliches are weaketh
(nice touch to begin the poem with a cliche and then bash it)
The Last Friday poems’
due on the 27th
(You might find another rhyme for "weaketh" unless you are just going to throw this "poem" awayeth)
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Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:11 am

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Re: Yellow Rose

Post  Velvet F on Sun May 22, 2011 11:25 am

Yellow Poems

Roses are red
cliches are weaketh
The Last Friday poems’
due on the 27th

I believe your title is misleading (plural) or are you referring to future peoms that we will be posting?
(I think I've got this figurede out!)
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YAY Velvet!

Post  tsukany on Sun May 22, 2011 4:08 pm

Piece of cake.
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