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    Yellow Rose

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    Yellow Rose

    Post  Admin on Sat May 21, 2011 6:24 am

    Yellow Poems

    Roses are red
    cliches are weaketh
    The Last Friday poems’
    due on the 27th

    --Todd
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    tsukany

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    Re: Yellow Rose

    Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:08 am

    Todd...I'm not sure that your rhyme scheme is very healthy. However, you are brilliant.
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    Yellow Poems

    Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:10 am

    Yellow Poems

    Roses are red
    cliches are weaketh
    (nice touch to begin the poem with a cliche and then bash it)
    The Last Friday poems’
    due on the 27th
    (You might find another rhyme for "weaketh" unless you are just going to throw this "poem" awayeth)
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    Todd's Poem

    Post  tsukany on Sat May 21, 2011 8:11 am

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    Re: Yellow Rose

    Post  Velvet F on Sun May 22, 2011 11:25 am

    Yellow Poems

    Roses are red
    cliches are weaketh
    The Last Friday poems’
    due on the 27th

    I believe your title is misleading (plural) or are you referring to future peoms that we will be posting?
    (I think I've got this figurede out!)
    Velvet

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    YAY Velvet!

    Post  tsukany on Sun May 22, 2011 4:08 pm

    Piece of cake.

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