My questions are concerning this title and whether the poem's tone is positive or negative. Thanks
Visitor’s Church
Visitors don’t stumble in,
but intentionally seek refuge
from dreary Sundays
that start another week,
another Monday,
followed by another Tuesday,
limping to Hump Day and repeat.
Repeat.
Repeat.
Repeat the same
over and over.
Church should be over and over,
but more like a mottled terrier in a beat-up, blue Toyota,
two paws on the Master’s lap,
two paws on the driver’s mirror,
helping shepherd traffic in Tulsa,
slinging slobber down the door trim.
Church should be Sunday,
followed by Monday,
then Tuesday, then Hump Day,
hoping for no breaks between drives.
--Sukany 28 March 2014
Visitor’s Church
Visitors don’t stumble in,
but intentionally seek refuge
from dreary Sundays
that start another week,
another Monday,
followed by another Tuesday,
limping to Hump Day and repeat.
Repeat.
Repeat.
Repeat the same
over and over.
Church should be over and over,
but more like a mottled terrier in a beat-up, blue Toyota,
two paws on the Master’s lap,
two paws on the driver’s mirror,
helping shepherd traffic in Tulsa,
slinging slobber down the door trim.
Church should be Sunday,
followed by Monday,
then Tuesday, then Hump Day,
hoping for no breaks between drives.
--Sukany 28 March 2014
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