The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


    a test. . . just ignore this

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    Pat

    Posts : 648
    Join date : 2011-09-12

    a test. . . just ignore this

    Post  Pat on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:56 am

         a secret message

     

    came through the still-life

    of rounded apples

    in the green fruit bowl:

    a tiny dark spot

    on one red beauty

     

    the painter knew life

    was temporary

     

    so sure, he painted

    a speck of black rot

    on ripe and seamless





    skin

    Pat

    Posts : 648
    Join date : 2011-09-12

    oh well

    Post  Pat on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:58 am

    it's Christmas!  We are saved even if I cannot format this poem the way I want to!  Rolling Eyes

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