Now I remember why I don't like form. My poem, Sparrows On Barbed Wire, was published in the anthology FROM UNDER AMERICA'S BRIDGES... thought I'd try a different viewpoint with #2...reads a little rough in places. Can you help? Dewell
SPARROWS ON BARBED WIRE #2
Timid they come from the brush and the bridge
To McDonald's parking lot
To fill an empty crop.
Limping they drag their world a-back, bubble wrapped
To glean the leavings
Of hurry scurry.
Dodging cars, trucks, boots and busses schooled
Flock to the dumpster dive
They seek to survive.
Screaming, Asst Mgr Big Bad Bob flat of foot and face
Brooms and flails with mops and pails
Threatening an aerie jail.
Starlings, short of tail, march in body armor goose-step
To flush the riff raff free
And please the Madame's tea.
Scorning grackles and crows adorn lights on high
Scream, cheer, make it clear
No sparrows here, My Dear.
Over and again the sparrows linger in fallow fields
To hover until night bids
A return to brush and bridge
Clinging to life with broken nails.
-Dewell H. Byrd
SPARROWS ON BARBED WIRE #2
Timid they come from the brush and the bridge
To McDonald's parking lot
To fill an empty crop.
Limping they drag their world a-back, bubble wrapped
To glean the leavings
Of hurry scurry.
Dodging cars, trucks, boots and busses schooled
Flock to the dumpster dive
They seek to survive.
Screaming, Asst Mgr Big Bad Bob flat of foot and face
Brooms and flails with mops and pails
Threatening an aerie jail.
Starlings, short of tail, march in body armor goose-step
To flush the riff raff free
And please the Madame's tea.
Scorning grackles and crows adorn lights on high
Scream, cheer, make it clear
No sparrows here, My Dear.
Over and again the sparrows linger in fallow fields
To hover until night bids
A return to brush and bridge
Clinging to life with broken nails.
-Dewell H. Byrd