(Struggling with S 2, lines 1 & 2 (tense issues/I've reworked the lines several times. Thought about reversing S 1 and 2 even.) Open to help with any of it. )
In a Chemo Lab
Not one patient speaks
an unwelcomed phrase
or plans a shrug or nod.
Not one auditioned for roles
played out here.
Not one judges another.
Instead, in big brown recliners,
most sit silent and stay alert
like an audience moments
before the play begins,
for actors to perform
endearing parts.
Like an owl, I watch movement
and listen closely to every
unscripted utterance
falling from mouths,
breaking hearts,
bringing souls nectar.
In a Chemo Lab
Not one patient speaks
an unwelcomed phrase
or plans a shrug or nod.
Not one auditioned for roles
played out here.
Not one judges another.
Instead, in big brown recliners,
most sit silent and stay alert
like an audience moments
before the play begins,
for actors to perform
endearing parts.
Like an owl, I watch movement
and listen closely to every
unscripted utterance
falling from mouths,
breaking hearts,
bringing souls nectar.