I have reworked this so many times. I am happy to turn it over to your eyes. I hope one of you saw this happening in the sky. I'll take any kind of help you can offer.
Blood Moon
Like moonflowers govern at night,
the milky moon rules the palm of the sky.
She rises, as always, over
the rim of the mountain,
and tonight she is lined up:
sun, earth, moon---earth in the middle.
Full and suspended, she crosses
the earth's shadow.
She is slowly swaddled in darkness
turning her lantern
a dull, reddish glow.
Tender, celestial event.
Such a minuscule movement of
God's finger.
Blood Moon
Like moonflowers govern at night,
the milky moon rules the palm of the sky.
She rises, as always, over
the rim of the mountain,
and tonight she is lined up:
sun, earth, moon---earth in the middle.
Full and suspended, she crosses
the earth's shadow.
She is slowly swaddled in darkness
turning her lantern
a dull, reddish glow.
Tender, celestial event.
Such a minuscule movement of
God's finger.