The Last Friday

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    Dennis 20
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    I am satisfied with this, but open to suggestion

    Post  Dennis 20 on Mon Jan 25, 2016 8:38 pm

    Sights of the Season

    The clouds are gauze.
    Geese honk sad and long,
    overhead, but out of sight. 
     
    Dried leaves underfoot
    answer from weary soles
    along the garden path.
     
    As vees wave goodbye
    to another Autumn,
    they drag the last of blue
     
    from the skies and fade,
    families leaving
    on vacation.

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