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I have lived near the Arkansas River for more than thirty years, thankfully on a hill - not in danger of flooding. I have done many "flood tours" on foot. This winter's flood was the worst I've seen.
I didn't want to be overly dramatic, but I wanted to record what I saw. I am hoping the line division stands in for punctuation. Your thoughts?
high water
the river goes home
rushes the downhills
flushes the culverts
lingers in the lowlands
the river consumes
its own banks
anxious to return
to natural mud
the river collects
tree limbs and trash cans
beer bottles and bush nests
ice chests and outbuildings
the river tumbles
gravel onto blacktop
knits thickets with caution tape
delivers pizza boxes downstream
the river leaves
apologies
of polished logs
and plastic chairs
hangs in a
stunted tree
a mangled cottontail
I have lived near the Arkansas River for more than thirty years, thankfully on a hill - not in danger of flooding. I have done many "flood tours" on foot. This winter's flood was the worst I've seen.
I didn't want to be overly dramatic, but I wanted to record what I saw. I am hoping the line division stands in for punctuation. Your thoughts?
high water
the river goes home
rushes the downhills
flushes the culverts
lingers in the lowlands
the river consumes
its own banks
anxious to return
to natural mud
the river collects
tree limbs and trash cans
beer bottles and bush nests
ice chests and outbuildings
the river tumbles
gravel onto blacktop
knits thickets with caution tape
delivers pizza boxes downstream
the river leaves
apologies
of polished logs
and plastic chairs
hangs in a
stunted tree
a mangled cottontail