Never have I used so many !, but they seemed the right punctuation. Help any way your can, whatever you see, needing improving.
Rebirth
I can live here?
How wonderful!
Grandma! Wayne! Marilyn!
Ohhhh.
So many, all crowded in.
Everyone looks healthy, beautiful.
Oh my! Oh my!
What a place! And so many of us!
Here, together.
What a place!
Oh yes, I can live here.
Rebirth
I can live here?
How wonderful!
Grandma! Wayne! Marilyn!
Ohhhh.
So many, all crowded in.
Everyone looks healthy, beautiful.
Oh my! Oh my!
What a place! And so many of us!
Here, together.
What a place!
Oh yes, I can live here.