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Post  Dennis2012 on Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:14 pm

ROSES

Roses are red
And so are stop signs
When Todd writes a poem
It doesn't rhymes (heee haw)

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Post  renee.barger on Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:26 pm

hehe!  Very Happy
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Post  tsukany on Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:24 am

Dennis2012/Todd

I would cut the parenthetical.  It detracts from the splendid rhyme employed in "Roses."

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TESTING AS DENNIS

Post  Dewell H. Byrd on Tue Sep 27, 2016 4:59 pm

Dennis,
Todd's poems would fit right in here on The Left Coast where almost nothing rhymes.  I like your jibe in this little-bit.  Do you have a limerick for him, too?  Hee HAW came out of Bakersfield, CA with Buck Owens.  They named the stockyards after him. Dewell

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