Nice to have some new blood, er... poets brave enough... OMEN. I'm considering dropping the last line... also the word "leap" seems too austere. Do all those "ings" bother anyone? All
suggestions welcome. Dewell
OMEN
North by north-east, alone
honking
scraping treetops
searching for the V
lost
instinct driven
Canada goose strains for
altitude
flutters, falls
recovers minus one flight
feather
destiny calling
I leap from my lounge
eager
to see, to help, to hope
my heart flutters, again
quivering
Is this my V
Dewell H. Byrd
suggestions welcome. Dewell
OMEN
North by north-east, alone
honking
scraping treetops
searching for the V
lost
instinct driven
Canada goose strains for
altitude
flutters, falls
recovers minus one flight
feather
destiny calling
I leap from my lounge
eager
to see, to help, to hope
my heart flutters, again
quivering
Is this my V
Dewell H. Byrd