Eyes are better this morning so I'll give it a try. Doc says "we" are progressing... as if it is "our" eyes.
Please help me find a title and clean up the ending.
UNTITLED ONE
morning and I are unsettled
clouds scrim like cream
shards of sunlight...
day is uncertain as am I
will she accept my apology
join me for alfresco
champagne brunch
in the wake of sharp words
fog drifts in and out
obscuring my mood...
will she find me wistful
"Come closer. Go away."
Dewell
Please help me find a title and clean up the ending.
UNTITLED ONE
morning and I are unsettled
clouds scrim like cream
shards of sunlight...
day is uncertain as am I
will she accept my apology
join me for alfresco
champagne brunch
in the wake of sharp words
fog drifts in and out
obscuring my mood...
will she find me wistful
"Come closer. Go away."
Dewell