LOVE THE ENDING!
What a nice, friendly poem.
You can tightening it but please don't lose that chalkdust-and-harmones feeling.
Dewell
What a nice, friendly poem.
You can tightening it but please don't lose that chalkdust-and-harmones feeling.
Dewell
The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.
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