The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


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    Dewell H. Byrd

    Posts : 348
    Join date : 2012-01-05
    Age : 87
    Location : Central Point, OR

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    Post  Dewell H. Byrd on Sun Jul 30, 2017 1:19 pm

    LOVE THE ENDING!
    What a nice, friendly poem.
    You can tightening it but please don't lose that chalkdust-and-harmones feeling.
    Dewell

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