Tone for Todd and MOOD...

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Tone for Todd and MOOD...

Post  Dewell H. Byrd on Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:35 pm

Yes, I think the tone carries. especially like the last stanza and find it more compelling... hummm, what would happen if this poem were inverted?

And I like Dennis's suggestions, too. Reading the poem again I'm reminded that we win some, lose some and some get rained out... Dewell

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