(I've been struggling for just the right words here. S 4: do I dump that line or keep it? What else?
Homesickness
You asked about my mood.
It's hard to cover
such a longing
when there's a mist hanging,
a distant dove cooing,
and I'm swallowing gray sky.
Images appear
of brothers, sisters, girlfriends
no longer with us.
All, graduated from life on earth.
The smell of coffee
stirs more sweet sorrow
embedded in my bones.
Something about a damp day.
Homesickness
You asked about my mood.
It's hard to cover
such a longing
when there's a mist hanging,
a distant dove cooing,
and I'm swallowing gray sky.
Images appear
of brothers, sisters, girlfriends
no longer with us.
All, graduated from life on earth.
The smell of coffee
stirs more sweet sorrow
embedded in my bones.
Something about a damp day.