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    Phooey! I messed up on a line. . .

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    Pat

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    Phooey! I messed up on a line. . .

    Post  Pat on Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:53 pm

    4th stanza: 4th line: left out a word (paddling) ---- should be: holding tight, paddling a jon-boat/heading for shore.

    It happens. Pat

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