After The Rain... I think this elusive poem, still lumpy, needs the critical eye of Last Friday Folk. It is almost musical in places then jumps the track in others. Puncuation is also inconsistent...I do like the images. I welcome all suggestions. Dewell
AFTER THE RAIN
Silence
hangs pale
over the garden.
Damp, fresh, clean
earth drinks its fill, sighs.
Picket fence releases prayers of vapor.
Rainbows
embrace the sky
lush with early omen.
Clouds
of starlings skitter about, glean.
Wind and light tease each other.
Earth
holds its breath
for a milli-second.
Grandma taps an egg
on the rim of the mixing bowl,
waits for the miracle to slip out.
-Dewell H. Byrd
AFTER THE RAIN
Silence
hangs pale
over the garden.
Damp, fresh, clean
earth drinks its fill, sighs.
Picket fence releases prayers of vapor.
Rainbows
embrace the sky
lush with early omen.
Clouds
of starlings skitter about, glean.
Wind and light tease each other.
Earth
holds its breath
for a milli-second.
Grandma taps an egg
on the rim of the mixing bowl,
waits for the miracle to slip out.
-Dewell H. Byrd