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EMPTY NEST
My dogwood tree cradles
A small empty bird's nest
That trembles gently in
Nervous bare branches
Like a child's stick drawing.
Winter wind has torn away
The leaves exposing the nest'
Young birds have fledged, flown.
The tree bark clings like an old man
With hands in pockets.
I wrap my winter bark around
Stooped shoulders, sip green
Tea, clutch my lap robe tighter
And wait to hear the chirping
Of my own scattered brood.
I hope for a call, card, note
Or best of all, a mini-van
Filled with laughter.
Dewell H. Byrd
EMPTY NEST
My dogwood tree cradles
A small empty bird's nest
That trembles gently in
Nervous bare branches
Like a child's stick drawing.
Winter wind has torn away
The leaves exposing the nest'
Young birds have fledged, flown.
The tree bark clings like an old man
With hands in pockets.
I wrap my winter bark around
Stooped shoulders, sip green
Tea, clutch my lap robe tighter
And wait to hear the chirping
Of my own scattered brood.
I hope for a call, card, note
Or best of all, a mini-van
Filled with laughter.
Dewell H. Byrd