My questions for the 4 bears (Pat, I refuse to address you separately by the name used for female bears) ...
Not enough or just right? Or leave it on the junk heap?
What about the title? My initial crack at a title was longer than the poem.
DOWN THE DOGLEG
Executed
rusty icebox,
bullet-ridden,
on its back.
Fire pit belly
bids me stay
to warm its bones.
Not enough or just right? Or leave it on the junk heap?
What about the title? My initial crack at a title was longer than the poem.
DOWN THE DOGLEG
Executed
rusty icebox,
bullet-ridden,
on its back.
Fire pit belly
bids me stay
to warm its bones.