I'm open to help. My goal is to create two pictures. I don't know if I need to keep or delete the last stanza????
The Leaf Burner in March
It is evening.
My somber father
in long white sleeves
has a lighthearted spell
when he fans flames
seeping through leaves,
running amok from a deep ditch,
climbing the bank,
creating a ring.
I stand at a distance
away from the smoke.
He swings, sways,
flutters a red kerchief
like a matador making passes
with a cape to attract
the strong bull
pawing, making primitive sounds,
keeping his head down.
Confident, my father
calls and waves for me
to come see, to join a roaring crowd
as he further excites them
with his dips and whirls,
making it all look dreadfully easy.
Above the bullring,
the smoke rolls out
in its own gray way,
swirling and pulling light
away from where my father
masters the bull.
The Leaf Burner in March
It is evening.
My somber father
in long white sleeves
has a lighthearted spell
when he fans flames
seeping through leaves,
running amok from a deep ditch,
climbing the bank,
creating a ring.
I stand at a distance
away from the smoke.
He swings, sways,
flutters a red kerchief
like a matador making passes
with a cape to attract
the strong bull
pawing, making primitive sounds,
keeping his head down.
Confident, my father
calls and waves for me
to come see, to join a roaring crowd
as he further excites them
with his dips and whirls,
making it all look dreadfully easy.
Above the bullring,
the smoke rolls out
in its own gray way,
swirling and pulling light
away from where my father
masters the bull.