Need a little help tightening up and honing this poem. HELP. Dewell
FIREFLY WISHES ALWAYS COME TRUE
That's what Sally, the new girl, said.
Up until then I thought they were
Called lightning bugs and smelled
Rancid in a Kerr fruit jar and on
My blue-stained fingertips.
All us guys chased bugs on a still
Summer night when the wind slept
And dew was forming on the grass
Down at the skinny-dipping pond.
Then we'd chase each other with
Our bug-filled jars as headlights
Pretending to be Flash Gordon.
Sally moved in next door. Everything
Stopped. Stared. Blinked.
Twelve years of stark raving G I R L.
We hardly breathed in her presence.
Couldn't talk much neither. When
She spoke about fireflies... how they
Blinked to attract mates... like holding
Hands, talking soft and secret
And if you made a wish, a firefly wish,
It's sure to come true iffin your heart
Is true. I reckon us boys got true of
Heart just watching words spill from her lips.
All the lids came off the jars that night
And fireflies wished for true love.
Dewell H. Byrd
FIREFLY WISHES ALWAYS COME TRUE
That's what Sally, the new girl, said.
Up until then I thought they were
Called lightning bugs and smelled
Rancid in a Kerr fruit jar and on
My blue-stained fingertips.
All us guys chased bugs on a still
Summer night when the wind slept
And dew was forming on the grass
Down at the skinny-dipping pond.
Then we'd chase each other with
Our bug-filled jars as headlights
Pretending to be Flash Gordon.
Sally moved in next door. Everything
Stopped. Stared. Blinked.
Twelve years of stark raving G I R L.
We hardly breathed in her presence.
Couldn't talk much neither. When
She spoke about fireflies... how they
Blinked to attract mates... like holding
Hands, talking soft and secret
And if you made a wish, a firefly wish,
It's sure to come true iffin your heart
Is true. I reckon us boys got true of
Heart just watching words spill from her lips.
All the lids came off the jars that night
And fireflies wished for true love.
Dewell H. Byrd