I need help with title and poem seems sparse of poetics. HELP! (PIGEON PROTEST?)
Is S#2 needed? Very rough offering.
Dewell
PIGEON SWARM
We're on, Friends.
All set for October 12, Columbus Day.
Our FLY-IN to DC will be
the greatest protest in human history.
It is about time our demands were heard.
Our suffering has been monumental
and we're tired of our needs being ignored.
Current trends indicate more abuse is coming.
Modern technology has passed us by
and reduced our habitat to barbed wire fences
where no respectable bird should perch.
The few remaining utility lines sag under us.
Lines are so crowded one can find little space
for morning song or fledgling flights.
Even the statues in the parks are massed
with blackbirds and lowly sparrows.
No protest signs, no long winded speeches
by loud mouthed Mockingbirds.
Either congress stops this WIRELESS craze
or we fertilize the government.
-Dewell
Is S#2 needed? Very rough offering.
Dewell
PIGEON SWARM
We're on, Friends.
All set for October 12, Columbus Day.
Our FLY-IN to DC will be
the greatest protest in human history.
It is about time our demands were heard.
Our suffering has been monumental
and we're tired of our needs being ignored.
Current trends indicate more abuse is coming.
Modern technology has passed us by
and reduced our habitat to barbed wire fences
where no respectable bird should perch.
The few remaining utility lines sag under us.
Lines are so crowded one can find little space
for morning song or fledgling flights.
Even the statues in the parks are massed
with blackbirds and lowly sparrows.
No protest signs, no long winded speeches
by loud mouthed Mockingbirds.
Either congress stops this WIRELESS craze
or we fertilize the government.
-Dewell