Need help tightening this poem. Could delete S #3. Local seniors love my "GROWING UP IN AR." poems. Title is bland, too. Dewell
HOLY HOLE
Near jumped outna the family pew
when my pointin’ finger found
a hole in my right front pocket
just when Rev. Billy Bob was goin’
on ‘bout Daniel and them lions.
Recon now I know where
my Barlow went. Been fussin’
morning, noon and night cause
a feller ain’t nearly a man iffin
he ain’t got no whittlin’ knife.
Last used it two worysome days
ago playing mumbly-peg on
the spittin’ bench out front of
Wash Winter’s gen’l store
with Jake and his Case knife.
Head hung low, toe in th dirt,
twistin’ buttons on my overalls,
rackin’ my brain, rattlin’ my
marbles a huntin’ my self sick
‘bout that Barlow Gramps gave me.
Retracin, every step, barn, school,
bed, creek… and there she be
stickin’ in a log where I gutted
a bullhead. Bet that feller Daniel
found a hole, lived to tell ‘bout it.
-Dewell H. Byrd
HOLY HOLE
Near jumped outna the family pew
when my pointin’ finger found
a hole in my right front pocket
just when Rev. Billy Bob was goin’
on ‘bout Daniel and them lions.
Recon now I know where
my Barlow went. Been fussin’
morning, noon and night cause
a feller ain’t nearly a man iffin
he ain’t got no whittlin’ knife.
Last used it two worysome days
ago playing mumbly-peg on
the spittin’ bench out front of
Wash Winter’s gen’l store
with Jake and his Case knife.
Head hung low, toe in th dirt,
twistin’ buttons on my overalls,
rackin’ my brain, rattlin’ my
marbles a huntin’ my self sick
‘bout that Barlow Gramps gave me.
Retracin, every step, barn, school,
bed, creek… and there she be
stickin’ in a log where I gutted
a bullhead. Bet that feller Daniel
found a hole, lived to tell ‘bout it.
-Dewell H. Byrd