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The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


    Tone for Todd and MOOD...

    Dewell H. Byrd
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    Dewell H. Byrd


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    Join date : 2012-01-05
    Age : 93
    Location : Central Point, OR
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    Tone for Todd and MOOD... Empty Tone for Todd and MOOD...

    Post  Dewell H. Byrd Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:35 pm

    Yes, I think the tone carries. especially like the last stanza and find it more compelling... hummm, what would happen if this poem were inverted?

    And I like Dennis's suggestions, too. Reading the poem again I'm reminded that we win some, lose some and some get rained out... Dewell
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