Writing for the monthly newsletter for this enclave of senior citizens where I reside is VERY difficult. They think it is not a poem unless it rhymes as in fourth grade lit class. And they are reluctant to discuss death even as the ambulance pulls out. However, they do pay attention when I offer something like this poem. Please help me tighten it up some. All suggestions appreciated. Dewell
GET YOUR HEAD RIGHT
When all your questions
about cremation are answered
and your head seems right
its time to sign a contract
and put your money down.
What do they do when a biggie
is in line ahead of you
requiring more than one fill
with some left over?
You want a mixture for all eternity?
Do they sweep out the overs,
pressure wash everything clean,
blow it out with a leaf thing,
use little whisk brooms?
You gotta know these things.
Momma wants her feet first
they being cold since the first issue.
Papa wants head first so as to see
he's going to the right place.
Not that it makes no never mind now.
You gotta get your head right first time
'cause there ain't no going back.
Once that hot lid slams
your kith and kin are heading
for the reading of the will.
-Dewell H. Byrd
GET YOUR HEAD RIGHT
When all your questions
about cremation are answered
and your head seems right
its time to sign a contract
and put your money down.
What do they do when a biggie
is in line ahead of you
requiring more than one fill
with some left over?
You want a mixture for all eternity?
Do they sweep out the overs,
pressure wash everything clean,
blow it out with a leaf thing,
use little whisk brooms?
You gotta know these things.
Momma wants her feet first
they being cold since the first issue.
Papa wants head first so as to see
he's going to the right place.
Not that it makes no never mind now.
You gotta get your head right first time
'cause there ain't no going back.
Once that hot lid slams
your kith and kin are heading
for the reading of the will.
-Dewell H. Byrd