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The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


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Hope it's ok I'm posting so late

renee.barger
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Join date : 2016-09-17
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Hope it's ok I'm posting so late Empty Hope it's ok I'm posting so late

Post  renee.barger Sat May 14, 2022 9:35 am

I started two new poems in April, but one is a bit more presentable than the other. I hope it's ok I'm sharing this one so late. It's so short that I keep moving the line breaks or changing phrases. I just can't get it quite right.


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I'm happy for you, honestly.
It’s just that your happy news 
reminds me 
I'm still praying and waiting.
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