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The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


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Alternate title: Prone to Wander

Sarah Anne
Sarah Anne


Posts : 9
Join date : 2022-08-23

Alternate title: Prone to Wander Empty Alternate title: Prone to Wander

Post  Sarah Anne Sat Mar 11, 2023 8:15 pm

Giving up Church for Lent 
Sarah Anne
Remember prayer circles 
Where others whispered words 
to a Being as real as we believed.
My fingers dug into my skin 
find a flaw, touch, squeeze, until blood,
and then I'd try to fold my hands again,
Try to focus on words again, listen or pray? Listen and pray, but still skin crawling. 
My turn next, what script do I pull to make a prayer worth praying for these people to pray or listen? Pray. God. Blood
under my fingernails.
Jesus, blood, sorry, thanks, unworthy, weather, salvation so people wouldn't be tormented for eternity. Skin, pick, blood.
Amen? Do they agree that this is my torment, that these moments shaped the ever wandering moments of my soul.
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