This is a rewrite. I've taken out the puncuation, softened some images, and hopefully made it smoother... more pleasing to the reader. Is there some music to this piece? Dewell
A Day To Count Gray Whales
Bluff leans out
windswept willows
cling to the edge
A dark carpet
sponges under foot
greens as spring beckons
Clam Beach sprawls
soft linen
beyond the river
Seastacks
cormorants
wind and water
Crab boats bob
gulls wheel in the wind
children chase plovers
A Day To Count Gray Whales
Bluff leans out
windswept willows
cling to the edge
A dark carpet
sponges under foot
greens as spring beckons
Clam Beach sprawls
soft linen
beyond the river
Seastacks
cormorants
wind and water
Crab boats bob
gulls wheel in the wind
children chase plovers