The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


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43234Mon Sep 24, 2018 2:55 pm
Pat Homesickness
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11Mon Sep 24, 2018 2:55 pm
Pat Homesickness
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418Sat Sep 01, 2018 4:02 pm
Karen Quick Read of a Quick Write
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314Tue Aug 07, 2018 5:42 pm
Pat Oh my gosh!  I forgot!
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518Mon Jul 02, 2018 9:37 am
tsukany Line breaks anyone?
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537Wed May 30, 2018 4:18 pm
Pat Connected Poem
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422Wed May 02, 2018 2:14 pm
Pat Communion  (too few letters, they say.)
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645Tue Apr 03, 2018 2:40 pm
tsukany Are there too many voices?
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746Thu Mar 01, 2018 12:32 pm
tsukany Is the Title Effective (Dennis/Ben)
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630Mon Jan 29, 2018 12:17 pm
Pat From Dennis/Ben
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57332Mon Jan 01, 2018 5:29 pm
Dewell H. Byrd poem from my college days
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420Mon Jan 01, 2018 5:29 pm
Dewell H. Byrd poem from my college days
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425Fri Dec 01, 2017 10:17 am
Pat Closure Poem
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420Thu Nov 02, 2017 5:49 pm
Pat Alone with Two Boys
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630Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:36 pm
Heidi Dehn Room of Friends
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534Sat Aug 26, 2017 1:45 pm
Karen ROOTBOUND.....
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627Sun Jul 30, 2017 7:52 pm
Dennis 2012  late to the party ... deconstructed mixed nuts
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422Fri Jun 30, 2017 10:13 pm
Pat Feedback BEFORE June 30th?
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429Mon May 29, 2017 8:36 pm
Pat What if I drop the first half of it?????  : )
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535Thu May 04, 2017 9:08 pm
Pat Does this poem need gutting, rearranging or what?
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642Thu May 04, 2017 3:03 pm
dennis 2012  Giving it a wack
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422Sun Feb 26, 2017 8:47 pm
Karen REJECTION SLIPS
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526Wed Feb 01, 2017 8:26 am
Pat The Distance Between Us
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63427Thu Jan 05, 2017 7:12 pm
tsukany I can not get to Easter egg, but
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643Thu Jan 05, 2017 7:12 pm
tsukany I can not get to Easter egg, but
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524Mon Nov 28, 2016 5:23 am
tsukany here’s your hat, what’s your hurry?
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543Fri Nov 04, 2016 10:54 am
Pat a Flashback
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757Wed Oct 05, 2016 10:48 am
Pat Trying something new
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543Sun Aug 28, 2016 5:28 pm
tsukany Edited again. . . I don't want it to be preachy and yet,. . .
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423Sun Jul 31, 2016 6:07 pm
Karen HOW I BURNED HIM DOWN
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537Tue Jun 28, 2016 11:07 am
Dennis 20  What questions MUST be answered
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425Mon May 30, 2016 9:36 pm
Karen Night Trail
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529Thu May 05, 2016 3:01 pm
Karen Late to the Party
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532Wed Mar 30, 2016 5:32 pm
Karen Just looking for weeds
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534Wed Mar 02, 2016 11:55 am
Dewell H. Byrd Is this just a story in stanzas?
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636Mon Feb 01, 2016 4:56 am
Karen high water
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60388Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:20 pm
Pat It's not 2015 anymore, but here's my poem.  Next,
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534Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:20 pm
Pat It's not 2015 anymore, but here's my poem.  Next,
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424Fri Dec 04, 2015 3:23 pm
Dewell H. Byrd Is the comparison clear?
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540Tue Nov 03, 2015 8:25 am
Dennis 20  Do I lose you in the set up
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534Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:45 am
Don C Any thoughts to make this better
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529Mon Aug 31, 2015 10:40 pm
Dennis 20  Among comments lend me a title
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536Tue Aug 11, 2015 8:33 pm
Pat Giving an October River
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534Mon Jun 29, 2015 9:07 am
dennis20  Is there poetics here
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421Sat May 30, 2015 5:27 pm
Karen How to Spread Mushrooms
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635Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:32 pm
dennis20  Trying to let the form enhance the poem
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636Sun Mar 29, 2015 9:16 pm
Pat Is redundancy okay or over the top?
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528Wed Mar 04, 2015 8:59 am
dennis20  Song from a Musician's Wife
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537Thu Feb 26, 2015 6:30 pm
Admin Thoughts During a Trip to the Trash Can
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59337Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:58 am
Pat a test. . . just ignore this
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740Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:58 am
Pat a test. . . just ignore this
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642Sun Nov 30, 2014 8:29 am
Pat Line breaks?  What else?
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538Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:52 am
tsukany Is the title enough to connect to the poem in the reader's eye
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528Sun Oct 26, 2014 3:58 pm
Karen Greetings, I am clueless
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321Thu Sep 04, 2014 5:24 pm
Pat A bit premature to post
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426Sun Aug 03, 2014 1:11 pm
Dewell H. Byrd I hope you can relate to my poem.  : )
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418Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:20 pm
Pat Looking for redundancies
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626Fri Jun 06, 2014 11:01 am
Pat Trying one more time.
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427Thu May 01, 2014 9:58 pm
Pat Mr. In-Between
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428Mon Mar 31, 2014 4:16 pm
Pat Any thoughts welcome
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420Sat Mar 01, 2014 9:54 pm
Pat Offer some help
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723Thu Feb 27, 2014 2:21 pm
Pat Check out title and I personified.  First person.  Under reconstruction.
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60361Mon Mar 09, 2015 3:11 pm
A.J.  Blessed Are They Who Have Not Seen
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519Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:47 am
dennis20  Help appreciated.  Whatever hits you.
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751Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:21 pm
Pat Paws to Remember
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532Wed Oct 30, 2013 11:55 am
Dewell H. Byrd Can you see the picture?
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558Mon Mar 09, 2015 3:11 pm
A.J.  Blessed Are They Who Have Not Seen
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416Sat Aug 31, 2013 6:24 pm
Pat Is the title sufficient for the poem--  comments welcome
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421Wed Aug 07, 2013 8:40 am
tsukany T Grief ---single space?
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425Tue Jul 02, 2013 10:10 am
Pat TRACTOR GRAVEYARD
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417Sun Jun 02, 2013 2:38 pm
Pat WORD formatting
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856Tue Apr 30, 2013 5:29 pm
Dewell H. Byrd What do you think needs to be fixed?
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314Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:26 pm
tsukany THE WAY OF THE WIND
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624Tue Mar 05, 2013 6:46 pm
dennis20  I am being tenacious, I suppose. . . .oh well,  here it is again:
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528Wed Jan 30, 2013 5:12 pm
Pat Are the visuals sufficient or too vague
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1047Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:20 pm
Pat Where I am now with the musician poem. . . .     Enough rest!  The Sabbath is over. . . back to work!
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628Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:20 pm
Pat Where I am now with the musician poem. . . .     Enough rest!  The Sabbath is over. . . back to work!
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419Sun Dec 09, 2012 8:57 am
Pat Chiropractor
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518Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:50 pm
Pat Concrete poem. . . . I'm open to suggestions.
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427Mon Oct 08, 2012 5:50 am
tsukany Comments welcomed
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424Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:51 pm
WhitneyC  Hoping the jump from the title is not too far.
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411Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:58 pm
Pat All the help I can get, please.
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528Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:22 pm
tsukany Inevitable Unions
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417Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:10 am
Pat I wonder if you can see what I see. . . what about wordiness?  trying to give a full picture.
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522Mon Apr 30, 2012 6:19 pm
tsukany Have I made the picture clear enough
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528Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:47 pm
Pat Since I can't figure out how to email everyone
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419Thu Mar 01, 2012 12:14 pm
dennis20  Dewells' Poem.  He's asking about the last two lines.
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521Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:22 pm
tsukany Looking at double meaning and a satisfying conclusion.
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29Mon Jan 02, 2012 10:07 pm
Pat Do the jumps make the poem hard to follow?
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48Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:05 am
tsukany Aritcle from WRITER on line breaks
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25Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:10 pm
Pat Working on humor.  Are the jumps too broad to follow?
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13Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:08 pm
Pat I Don't Buy Tickets, But
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12Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:10 pm
Pat Working on humor.  Are the jumps too broad to follow?
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26Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:04 pm
tsukany Sept Poem "Looking Up"  I am experimenting with line length in this one.  I have been inspied by John Leax of late, with his short lines.
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13Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:40 am
Pat The Triplets  (or Triplets) :  limited by characters accepted
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13Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:04 pm
tsukany Sept Poem "Looking Up"  I am experimenting with line length in this one.  I have been inspied by John Leax of late, with his short lines.
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315Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:21 pm
tsukany "Walking"  I am still thinking about the sounds of the words in the lines.  I need to find a way to preserve my indents and spacing.  :(
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14Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:37 pm
tsukany A Tribute to Marjorie Content
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13Thu Sep 01, 2011 12:30 am
Guest  Rvier Revisited
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18Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:21 pm
tsukany "Walking"  I am still thinking about the sounds of the words in the lines.  I need to find a way to preserve my indents and spacing.  :(
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414Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:28 pm
Guest  they would have you believe
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26Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:28 pm
Guest  they would have you believe
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14Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:57 pm
Velvet F Seasoned for a Contest  "I still need help with the 'music' of each line"
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14Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:21 am
Guest  July - ON HANDS
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27Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:45 pm
tsukany June poem FISH BOWL
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14Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:09 pm
Velvet F "The Inspirational Stuff"  This poem's format is intentional.  It should "flow" with different font sizes and margins.
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13Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:45 pm
tsukany June poem FISH BOWL
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May '11 Poems

Post May's poem in your folder. We should be able to copy a line or the entire poem. We can paste that into our response and add our comments. The learning curve may be steep but we should find this a clean format for editing. **I really like Velvet's practice of CAPITALIZING the title to the poem in the forum entry.

525Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:01 am
Guest  The Last Friday  (I am working on the "music" of the lines as they are read aloud)
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210Sat Jun 04, 2011 11:51 pm
Guest  small ntown rag
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15Mon May 30, 2011 9:43 pm
Velvet F May poem: Song Fest
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16Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:01 am
Guest  The Last Friday  (I am working on the "music" of the lines as they are read aloud)
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14Mon May 30, 2011 12:55 pm
kilee1231 Rat Catchers
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310Sun May 22, 2011 4:08 pm
tsukany Yellow Rose

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