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    Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:36 pm
    Heidi Dehn Room of Friends
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    Heidi Dehn Room of Friends
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    Karen ROOTBOUND.....
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    Dennis 2012  late to the party ... deconstructed mixed nuts
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    Pat Feedback BEFORE June 30th?
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    Mon May 29, 2017 8:36 pm
    Pat What if I drop the first half of it?????  : )
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    Pat Does this poem need gutting, rearranging or what?
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    dennis 2012  Giving it a wack
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    Karen REJECTION SLIPS
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    Pat The Distance Between Us
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    tsukany I can not get to Easter egg, but
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    tsukany I can not get to Easter egg, but
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    Mon Nov 28, 2016 5:23 am
    tsukany here’s your hat, what’s your hurry?
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    Pat a Flashback
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    Pat Trying something new
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    tsukany Edited again. . . I don't want it to be preachy and yet,. . .
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    Karen HOW I BURNED HIM DOWN
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    Dennis 20  What questions MUST be answered
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    Karen Night Trail
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    Karen Late to the Party
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    Karen Just looking for weeds
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    Dewell H. Byrd Is this just a story in stanzas?
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    Karen high water
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    Pat It's not 2015 anymore, but here's my poem.  Next,
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    Pat It's not 2015 anymore, but here's my poem.  Next,
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    Dewell H. Byrd Is the comparison clear?
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    Dennis 20  Do I lose you in the set up
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    Don C Any thoughts to make this better
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    Dennis 20  Among comments lend me a title
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    Pat Giving an October River
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    dennis20  Is there poetics here
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    Karen How to Spread Mushrooms
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    dennis20  Trying to let the form enhance the poem
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    Pat Is redundancy okay or over the top?
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    dennis20  Song from a Musician's Wife
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    Admin Thoughts During a Trip to the Trash Can
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    Pat a test. . . just ignore this
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    Pat a test. . . just ignore this
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    Sun Nov 30, 2014 8:29 am
    Pat Line breaks?  What else?
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    tsukany Is the title enough to connect to the poem in the reader's eye
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    Karen Greetings, I am clueless
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    Pat A bit premature to post
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    Dewell H. Byrd I hope you can relate to my poem.  : )
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    Pat Looking for redundancies
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    Pat Trying one more time.
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    Pat Mr. In-Between
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    Pat Any thoughts welcome
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    Pat Offer some help
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    Pat Check out title and I personified.  First person.  Under reconstruction.
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    A.J.  Blessed Are They Who Have Not Seen
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    dennis20  Help appreciated.  Whatever hits you.
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    Pat Paws to Remember
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    Dewell H. Byrd Can you see the picture?
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    A.J.  Blessed Are They Who Have Not Seen
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    Pat Is the title sufficient for the poem--  comments welcome
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    tsukany T Grief ---single space?
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    Pat TRACTOR GRAVEYARD
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    Pat WORD formatting
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    Dewell H. Byrd What do you think needs to be fixed?
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    tsukany THE WAY OF THE WIND
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    dennis20  I am being tenacious, I suppose. . . .oh well,  here it is again:
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    Pat Are the visuals sufficient or too vague
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    Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:20 pm
    Pat Where I am now with the musician poem. . . .     Enough rest!  The Sabbath is over. . . back to work!
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    Pat Where I am now with the musician poem. . . .     Enough rest!  The Sabbath is over. . . back to work!
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    Pat Chiropractor
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    Pat Concrete poem. . . . I'm open to suggestions.
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    tsukany Comments welcomed
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    WhitneyC  Hoping the jump from the title is not too far.
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    Pat All the help I can get, please.
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    tsukany Inevitable Unions
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    Pat I wonder if you can see what I see. . . what about wordiness?  trying to give a full picture.
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    tsukany Have I made the picture clear enough
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    Pat Since I can't figure out how to email everyone
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    dennis20  Dewells' Poem.  He's asking about the last two lines.
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    tsukany Looking at double meaning and a satisfying conclusion.
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    Pat Do the jumps make the poem hard to follow?
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    Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:05 am
    tsukany Aritcle from WRITER on line breaks
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    Pat Working on humor.  Are the jumps too broad to follow?
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    Pat I Don't Buy Tickets, But
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    Pat Working on humor.  Are the jumps too broad to follow?
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    tsukany Sept Poem "Looking Up"  I am experimenting with line length in this one.  I have been inspied by John Leax of late, with his short lines.
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    Pat The Triplets  (or Triplets) :  limited by characters accepted
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    tsukany Sept Poem "Looking Up"  I am experimenting with line length in this one.  I have been inspied by John Leax of late, with his short lines.
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    tsukany "Walking"  I am still thinking about the sounds of the words in the lines.  I need to find a way to preserve my indents and spacing.  :(
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    Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:37 pm
    tsukany A Tribute to Marjorie Content
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    Guest  Rvier Revisited
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    tsukany "Walking"  I am still thinking about the sounds of the words in the lines.  I need to find a way to preserve my indents and spacing.  :(
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    Guest  they would have you believe
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    Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:57 pm
    Velvet F Seasoned for a Contest  "I still need help with the 'music' of each line"
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    Guest  July - ON HANDS
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    tsukany June poem FISH BOWL
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    Velvet F "The Inspirational Stuff"  This poem's format is intentional.  It should "flow" with different font sizes and margins.
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    tsukany June poem FISH BOWL
  • May '11 Poems


    Post May's poem in your folder. We should be able to copy a line or the entire poem. We can paste that into our response and add our comments. The learning curve may be steep but we should find this a clean format for editing. **I really like Velvet's practice of CAPITALIZING the title to the poem in the forum entry.
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    Guest  The Last Friday  (I am working on the "music" of the lines as they are read aloud)
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    Velvet F May poem: Song Fest
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    Guest  The Last Friday  (I am working on the "music" of the lines as they are read aloud)
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    kilee1231 Rat Catchers
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    tsukany Yellow Rose
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