I've been squeezing this poem for a week. now it is time to get help from that AWESOME Friday team. All suggestions appreciated. Dewell
OUR BORDER SEIVE
nostrils full of sage and sand
sweat streaked bodies glistening
in the wan moonlight, we
move in silent waves
prodded to we-know-not-where
by hope and stories told by
dreamers and false guides.
Desparation guides our steps
to leaky borders made by man.
If in dreams I see myself
the butterfly, flitting unnoticed
from sage to cactus, what
man-made boundary prevails?
If I dream myself a drifting cloud;
a sage hen; roadrunner; early morning fog;
sirocco wind in the guard'd face;
might I slip by with impunity?
Is it only humans that are truly foreign?
---- Dewell H. Byrd
OUR BORDER SEIVE
nostrils full of sage and sand
sweat streaked bodies glistening
in the wan moonlight, we
move in silent waves
prodded to we-know-not-where
by hope and stories told by
dreamers and false guides.
Desparation guides our steps
to leaky borders made by man.
If in dreams I see myself
the butterfly, flitting unnoticed
from sage to cactus, what
man-made boundary prevails?
If I dream myself a drifting cloud;
a sage hen; roadrunner; early morning fog;
sirocco wind in the guard'd face;
might I slip by with impunity?
Is it only humans that are truly foreign?
---- Dewell H. Byrd