This is a soft poem but may have some potential. I struggled with the last stanza. Any help will be appreciated. Grandaughter, sophomore at university in Utah, will likely have an opinion or two... Dewell
WHEN I WAS YOUR AGE
Papa spoke
like periods at the
end of my obituary.
Mama looked
for things to fix
my hair, ears, clothes.
Big brother
pushed me between
the table and supper.
Preacher breathed
Hellfire words
that guilted me forever.
Teacher wrapped
knuckles hard
for dangling participles.
It’s a wonder
I survived at all
to birth a kid like you.
So, go do your homework
on that free government
Apple thing.
-Dewell H. Byrd
WHEN I WAS YOUR AGE
Papa spoke
like periods at the
end of my obituary.
Mama looked
for things to fix
my hair, ears, clothes.
Big brother
pushed me between
the table and supper.
Preacher breathed
Hellfire words
that guilted me forever.
Teacher wrapped
knuckles hard
for dangling participles.
It’s a wonder
I survived at all
to birth a kid like you.
So, go do your homework
on that free government
Apple thing.
-Dewell H. Byrd