Having trouble with that transition couplet... any and all suggestions appreciated. Dewell
CALLING DOWN THE GEESE
I squealed with delight
jumped, pointed, yelled
asking her to call the geese
down to our pond.
I want to put my arms around
their necks, fly far, far away.
Patience Little One, she laughed
and tucked a feather in my hair.
They are following the evening sun,
following their glow road home.
Some birds come, some birds go.
All birds call to my heart.
I put mu arms around her neck,
wipe the sweat from her cheeks,
listen to her soft sighs, the rattle.
This is her time to call the geese down,
to follow her glow road home.
On some pond yet unknown to me
she glides across the pewter of the night
calling me down.
-Dewell H. Byrd
CALLING DOWN THE GEESE
I squealed with delight
jumped, pointed, yelled
asking her to call the geese
down to our pond.
I want to put my arms around
their necks, fly far, far away.
Patience Little One, she laughed
and tucked a feather in my hair.
They are following the evening sun,
following their glow road home.
Some birds come, some birds go.
All birds call to my heart.
I put mu arms around her neck,
wipe the sweat from her cheeks,
listen to her soft sighs, the rattle.
This is her time to call the geese down,
to follow her glow road home.
On some pond yet unknown to me
she glides across the pewter of the night
calling me down.
-Dewell H. Byrd