I'll welcome any and all things you find to make this poem comfortable for the reader. I've wrestled with deleting stanzas three and five... still wrestling... Dewell
SORTING THE ASHES
Grandma wants to sort out my ashes
after she cleans them up some.
Good deeds here, bad deeds there, lots
of in between stuff; things I did
that don't make no difference.
None of her kith or kin will
see the Pearly Gates with dirty
doings in their urn, not if she
can sift and sort the remains
of their wayward ways.
Where she gets the power to know
all this stuff, find it in the ashes,
sort it into little piles, I'll never know.
Yet the whole clan stands by in black
silence not daring to speak up.
Grandma decides who gets the leavings
after St. Pete and Satan gets their likes.
Might be each of my kids gets a
smidgen of me to grace their mantle,
collect dust, spill to the hearth.
When I die, please
don't let Grandma sort my ashes.
Dewell H. Byrd
SORTING THE ASHES
Grandma wants to sort out my ashes
after she cleans them up some.
Good deeds here, bad deeds there, lots
of in between stuff; things I did
that don't make no difference.
None of her kith or kin will
see the Pearly Gates with dirty
doings in their urn, not if she
can sift and sort the remains
of their wayward ways.
Where she gets the power to know
all this stuff, find it in the ashes,
sort it into little piles, I'll never know.
Yet the whole clan stands by in black
silence not daring to speak up.
Grandma decides who gets the leavings
after St. Pete and Satan gets their likes.
Might be each of my kids gets a
smidgen of me to grace their mantle,
collect dust, spill to the hearth.
When I die, please
don't let Grandma sort my ashes.
Dewell H. Byrd