(Note: I can't respond to poems until Sunday. In Memphis for TN's Poet Festival.)
Blackbirds
Black wing-tips fan fast
like funeral fans in the hands
of women waving.
Against billowy clouds,
they become a moving canvas
banking, arcing, calling out
the sounds of ancient days.
Down below,
circles of hay laying
here and there in a field.
When the western sky puts on
its red dress, these black
shiny flappers veer and tease
and circle like dervishes
twirling the last rags of day.
I hear a rational man explaining,
It’s about the updraft of warm air.
Could be,
but I’m clinging to that subtle shift
in their final spin
throbbing with dance and song.
Blackbirds
Black wing-tips fan fast
like funeral fans in the hands
of women waving.
Against billowy clouds,
they become a moving canvas
banking, arcing, calling out
the sounds of ancient days.
Down below,
circles of hay laying
here and there in a field.
When the western sky puts on
its red dress, these black
shiny flappers veer and tease
and circle like dervishes
twirling the last rags of day.
I hear a rational man explaining,
It’s about the updraft of warm air.
Could be,
but I’m clinging to that subtle shift
in their final spin
throbbing with dance and song.