A revised poem... not sure about puncuation... open to any suggestions... before I push it out the door for publishers to enjoy(?). Dewell
PORTRAITS
Daughter's Hands,
soft as thistledown,
ewe's milk to lamb---
sure and supple---
grasp the plate and cup
like puff balls at the fair:
cotton candy suds.
Dream: ribbons at the cotillion.
Mother's Hands,
hard as twisted pinecones,
palm lines toil engraved---
steady as the wheel mare---
grasp the plate and cup
like carding boards:
knots in the drying towel.
Duty: fog lifting off the lake.
-Dewell H. Byrd
PORTRAITS
Daughter's Hands,
soft as thistledown,
ewe's milk to lamb---
sure and supple---
grasp the plate and cup
like puff balls at the fair:
cotton candy suds.
Dream: ribbons at the cotillion.
Mother's Hands,
hard as twisted pinecones,
palm lines toil engraved---
steady as the wheel mare---
grasp the plate and cup
like carding boards:
knots in the drying towel.
Duty: fog lifting off the lake.
-Dewell H. Byrd