tsukany Tue Apr 03, 2018 2:40 pm
Willie
I thought to take a moment to share a response to your inquiry. Not disagreeing at ALL, just having fun explicating my own mind and poem.
Not a bad experience for me.
Todd
Adventures in Your Space (YOUR space not mine)
Family members and teammates the past twelve years. (We have been in school together our entire lives)
I remain stationed behind the pack mule, with a shovel and wheelbarrow. (I follow the “parade of popular folks” (as one who carries all the burden), cleaning up the “dung” left behind)
I have mapped the backs of your heads, (I don’t know your faces since you never look at me, like “I know like the back of my hand”)
memorized your names emblazoned on red-and-white Stoneman Douglas jerseys. (you are the popular folks, sports icons, cheerleaders, . . . . )
That one time, I was close enough to you to translate word from a mass of mumbles. (We are not close enough for you to know me (irony with first line of poem) but I snuck up just once)
Stupid. (This is what I heard. No reference. Just what I, the persona, heard)
Never again. (Words from the persona or the popular kids, intentionally ambiguous)
This mess doesn’t belong to me. (Return to the title of the poem/theme)
--T.A. Sukany 22 Mar 2018