Do the NO caps, No punctuation work here? New for me.
on redbirds crashing into the window
what can I say
about the redbirds
taking suicidal dives
into the dining room window
daily, they crash against glass
that’s not all unmarked graves lay
beneath window panes
behind green ferns
where birds seem set on
instant death
wait
perhaps a few birds can not resist
the thrill of the chase
from feathers beaks dark eyes
bent on darting and zooming
high risk
not enough zing in singing
not enough zag in marking time
where you watch a tree slowly
fill up with humdrum birds
knowing nothing about
crash speeds
one last thing
no trace of their flaming presence
unless a witness tells it
on redbirds crashing into the window
what can I say
about the redbirds
taking suicidal dives
into the dining room window
daily, they crash against glass
that’s not all unmarked graves lay
beneath window panes
behind green ferns
where birds seem set on
instant death
wait
perhaps a few birds can not resist
the thrill of the chase
from feathers beaks dark eyes
bent on darting and zooming
high risk
not enough zing in singing
not enough zag in marking time
where you watch a tree slowly
fill up with humdrum birds
knowing nothing about
crash speeds
one last thing
no trace of their flaming presence
unless a witness tells it