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forgiveness, a choice
married 15 years.
one shaky event
broke vows between them,
fragmenting four lives
and drenching everyone
in riddles and fog.
drab years followed.
the woman’s ache became
a one-note whine
sung like cicadas.
her eyes had memorized
the stump slowly rotting
in the middle of the yard.
by the time she found words,
she understood he'd crafted darts
and she'd generated ice.
at last, she turned toward
the yellowing birch
and was stunned to see
how quick the tree was
to catch the light.
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forgiveness, a choice
married 15 years.
one shaky event
broke vows between them,
fragmenting four lives
and drenching everyone
in riddles and fog.
drab years followed.
the woman’s ache became
a one-note whine
sung like cicadas.
her eyes had memorized
the stump slowly rotting
in the middle of the yard.
by the time she found words,
she understood he'd crafted darts
and she'd generated ice.
at last, she turned toward
the yellowing birch
and was stunned to see
how quick the tree was
to catch the light.
Last edited by Pat on Sat Nov 23, 2019 9:52 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : double spacing)