This is a poem Todd has seen before with another title. (So it may be familiar?) In fact, I can't find the other poem. That happens with title changes sometimes, I think. I hate losing a poem! It needed more critique. Not sure if I made it better or worse, but I started over. Here it is, needing your eyes and ears.
Bawling Cow
In the dark of the night.
a cow bawls and bawls.
I lie in a distant hermitage
listening.
My own sorrows swell.
Here, I don’t know what
I’ve wandered into—
unknown skies,
cedar trees, a bawling cow.
Surely brokenness
goes with such a noisy voice.
I contemplate joining the cow.
Maybe if I had an old fashioned,
sobbing time….
The next morning a young nun,
bright-eyed and full of delight,
greets me on the red road.
A calf! a calf was born last night!
Exhausted and blank, I smile
and take a deep breath.
Who can ask for more?
Bawling Cow
In the dark of the night.
a cow bawls and bawls.
I lie in a distant hermitage
listening.
My own sorrows swell.
Here, I don’t know what
I’ve wandered into—
unknown skies,
cedar trees, a bawling cow.
Surely brokenness
goes with such a noisy voice.
I contemplate joining the cow.
Maybe if I had an old fashioned,
sobbing time….
The next morning a young nun,
bright-eyed and full of delight,
greets me on the red road.
A calf! a calf was born last night!
Exhausted and blank, I smile
and take a deep breath.
Who can ask for more?