Looking for feedback about the ending of this shortie.
Maverick
In the days of black-and-white,
a cigar man got off the street when
the gunslinger moved his right hand
and his mouth. One told his grand-
children stories at Christmas.
--Sukany 07 Oct 2014
Maverick
In the days of black-and-white,
a cigar man got off the street when
the gunslinger moved his right hand
and his mouth. One told his grand-
children stories at Christmas.
--Sukany 07 Oct 2014