Pat Sat Aug 25, 2012 10:46 am
Dennis, I don't know if you need the first four lines or not. We are going to see how fond you are of barns. You embrace them. Of course they have their own beauty and you love them. You are going to show us. I'm just thinking about barns: they hold things, keep things: hay, leaning tools, animals, etc. They have history. Some sag and settle and get wounded before they finally fall in. I've traveled country roads to just take photos of barns. Colorful. Beautiful. I like your topic.
They hold themselves. . . hmm. Might be a good place for a metaphor: like defiant grandfathers or they become proud soldiers holding ground, etc. You get the idea. When you speak of taking on color/ gray or green, I then thought of camouflage! : ) Like soldiers willing to die for the ground. Protectiveness from weather, storms. This is just how my mind worked. Take what you want and leave the rest. I'll play it out: while on duty, they can still rejoice. . . nesters, etc. I like the sounds: grunts and groans, maybe popping when you step on the floorboards. They keep vigil, so they ARE protective and caretaking. One image we can identify with and I'd run with it. . . . soldier, grandfather, etc. I'd make it a masculine image because barns are hard labor related. I'd name the trees/flowers/weeds or describe them. . . whatever. Be particular. I usually see leafy trees nearby, maybe a shade tree. Flowers: butterfly weed (it's orange and a wildflower) or big hydrangas (never in Texas. . . must be where it rains now and then to survive the sun. . . always in the shade and faces north. After saying all that, I'd go with butterfly weed or sunflowers! More common around barns and abandoned areas. Poised. . . think about your image. . . hmmm. I don't know if a caregiver would poise or not. . . maybe so. . . maybe lean or settle? What is the perfect light? I'd describe. Is the sun hanging high in the sky? So this old barn has knowledge but it never comes through? Is that what you are saying? I hear hard-working, strength but aged. It has done its job. In fact, it is still grounded. Maybe I'm reading too much into it. I'll let the guys take it from here. Remember, just take what fits from me. . . . Pat