"Bad-Bad-Bad" computer hung me up for days... but here I am at last enjoying your poems and offering mine. Looking for some fine tuning. Does use of Marge and Terry tend to take away the universality or add to the reality... This event actually happened, with slight modification. Suggestions? Dewell
BLACK MAGIC
A pair of crows strolled across
my lawn as if taking my measure
at 11:30 AM on a wintery Thursday.
A lookout perched stark still
on Marge's roof making never
a sound; an omen, an avian
groundhog testing the calendar?
Three more crows swished in,
paced, blended with the blacktop street.
No chatter or squabbling, silent as
a tomb, 50+ more came strutting,
inspecting, gathering on Terry's lawn.
Quiet as a moonless night,
no dogs barked, no cars passed.
This Murder of crows dispersed
quickly as it had appeared. I
stood, mouth agape, in disbelief
of their mysterious visit.
Lookout feathered a course
winking at me as he banked... somewhere.
-Dewell H. Byrd
BLACK MAGIC
A pair of crows strolled across
my lawn as if taking my measure
at 11:30 AM on a wintery Thursday.
A lookout perched stark still
on Marge's roof making never
a sound; an omen, an avian
groundhog testing the calendar?
Three more crows swished in,
paced, blended with the blacktop street.
No chatter or squabbling, silent as
a tomb, 50+ more came strutting,
inspecting, gathering on Terry's lawn.
Quiet as a moonless night,
no dogs barked, no cars passed.
This Murder of crows dispersed
quickly as it had appeared. I
stood, mouth agape, in disbelief
of their mysterious visit.
Lookout feathered a course
winking at me as he banked... somewhere.
-Dewell H. Byrd