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The Last Friday

The Last Friday is a poetry editing group. Once a month, we post a poem and then offer feedback to the other poems on the Forum. We're a friendly but honest group. We value each other deeply and desire for every poet to be published or become famous.


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South carolina poem

tsukany
tsukany


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Join date : 2011-05-21

South carolina poem Empty South carolina poem

Post  tsukany Sat Oct 01, 2022 10:47 am

That One Day in Columbia,, SC

Four deer in the front yard 
on the day of your birth. 
Probably normal travel
for this neighborhood.  

We, too, have come from afar 
to celebrate.  Maybe not as 
world-changing as one centuries
ago, but just as welcome.

–Todd Sukany 14 Sep 2022
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Pat


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South carolina poem Empty Birth day celebrations...

Post  Pat Sat Oct 01, 2022 11:45 am

S 1:  I'm thinking you are there in S C for a birthday celebration...not so unusual for that neighborhood for visitors to come from afar.  (I like the 4 deer)

S 2:  Wise men came from afar to celebrate the Christ child. Both babies are welcomed.

I like it very much.
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