Heading out for the morning ... I'm looking forward to reading your poems this weekend. Running late!
I don't know if this is a poem that should stay in my journal, or if it has potential and interest outside my head. The original title is Song from a Younger Me. It didn't seem like that set the stage well enough if I was going to let it out of the box. Thoughts and suggestions are welcome, including "put it back in the box."
My husband was a bar musician. He quit his last daytime job in 1963. He worked until Alzheimer's wouldn't let him anymore. He played mostly as a single.
Song from a Musician's Wife
(Song from a Younger Me)
I'm not his old lady.
He's not my old man.
Yes, I'm sitting here alone.
Yes, I'm with the band.
No, I don't mean all of them.
The guy with the guitar.
I don't here come every night.
Yes, it is a redneck bar.
No, this isn't my real color.
Yes, it's my real hair.
I don't want a cigarette.
It's okay if you sit there.
No, we live in Little Rock.
We don't live in the van.
The girls don't really bother me.
I'd rather you not touch my hand.
I don't want another drink.
That's a diamond in his ear.
He has always had long hair.
Yes, I've seen him chug a beer.
I don't think he knows that song.
Well, tip him, he might try.
Yes, this is his normal job.
No, I don't get high.
It was nice to meet you, too.
No, not many in a dive.
Thank you, but we'll pass tonight.
We've got a real long drive.
I don't know if this is a poem that should stay in my journal, or if it has potential and interest outside my head. The original title is Song from a Younger Me. It didn't seem like that set the stage well enough if I was going to let it out of the box. Thoughts and suggestions are welcome, including "put it back in the box."
My husband was a bar musician. He quit his last daytime job in 1963. He worked until Alzheimer's wouldn't let him anymore. He played mostly as a single.
Song from a Musician's Wife
(Song from a Younger Me)
I'm not his old lady.
He's not my old man.
Yes, I'm sitting here alone.
Yes, I'm with the band.
No, I don't mean all of them.
The guy with the guitar.
I don't here come every night.
Yes, it is a redneck bar.
No, this isn't my real color.
Yes, it's my real hair.
I don't want a cigarette.
It's okay if you sit there.
No, we live in Little Rock.
We don't live in the van.
The girls don't really bother me.
I'd rather you not touch my hand.
I don't want another drink.
That's a diamond in his ear.
He has always had long hair.
Yes, I've seen him chug a beer.
I don't think he knows that song.
Well, tip him, he might try.
Yes, this is his normal job.
No, I don't get high.
It was nice to meet you, too.
No, not many in a dive.
Thank you, but we'll pass tonight.
We've got a real long drive.