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On the Sanctuary Stage
During the Christmas Season
Sitting in church chairs
under bright overhead lights,
three men pick and strum
curved guitars.
Another draws a bow
over submissive strings.
A fifth holds his harmonica
to lips, closes eyes and blows
angelic sounds. The woman
—off to the side playing the piano—
reads no music, but her fingers
do not hesitate to dance
a confident jig.
All this harmony,
straight from the hearts of players,
lures a flock of sheep along.
Musicians, like shepherds, lead;
worshippers follow,
inhaling and bursting forth
in song of praise,
lifting words of old
to a newborn king.
Pat Durmon, 2012
On the Sanctuary Stage
During the Christmas Season
Sitting in church chairs
under bright overhead lights,
three men pick and strum
curved guitars.
Another draws a bow
over submissive strings.
A fifth holds his harmonica
to lips, closes eyes and blows
angelic sounds. The woman
—off to the side playing the piano—
reads no music, but her fingers
do not hesitate to dance
a confident jig.
All this harmony,
straight from the hearts of players,
lures a flock of sheep along.
Musicians, like shepherds, lead;
worshippers follow,
inhaling and bursting forth
in song of praise,
lifting words of old
to a newborn king.
Pat Durmon, 2012