| | | Where I am now with the musician poem. . . . Enough rest! The Sabbath is over. . . back to work! | Dec 2012 | Pat | 2 | 772 | Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:20 pm by Pat |
| | | I took another shot at it. . . . | Dec 2012 | Pat | 1 | 424 | Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:47 am by tsukany |
| | | My title is too long. . . . what else? Is something missing at the closure? | Dec 2012 | Pat | 3 | 399 | Fri Dec 28, 2012 9:45 pm by tsukany |
| | | Here's what I have. . . does the repetition overwhelm you? I like G. Stern's poetry. | Nov 2012 | Pat | 3 | 413 | Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:27 pm by dennis20 |
| | | Concrete poem. . . . I'm open to suggestions. | Oct Poems | Pat | 2 | 1093 | Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:50 pm by Pat |
| | | I have grandchildren and going out of town | Oct Poems | Pat | 0 | 352 | Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:14 am by Pat |
| | | Considering this for a first poem in a manuscript about a nursing home. . . . | Sept Poems | Pat | 11 | 643 | Sun Oct 07, 2012 10:35 pm by dennis20 |
| | | I'm striving for present day beauty and historical significance. I tried stanzas and didn't like it. Open to any help. Slice and dice. Thanks, Pat | Aug Poems | Pat | 4 | 464 | Mon Sep 03, 2012 2:26 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | This is an old memory. . . coping skill actually. How does it work in a poem? | July Poems | Pat | 3 | 398 | Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:04 pm by Pat |
| | | Phooey! I messed up on a line. . . | July Poems | Pat | 0 | 358 | Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:53 pm by Pat |
| | | Is this humorous? A bit long, but I wanted to stay with couplets. . . | June Poem | Pat | 6 | 488 | Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:01 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | I wonder if you can see what I see. . . what about wordiness? trying to give a full picture. | May Poems | Pat | 4 | 992 | Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:10 am by Pat |
| | | does this poem work as a prose poem? suggestions, welcome | April Poems | Pat | 5 | 654 | Mon Apr 30, 2012 6:28 am by tsukany |
| | | I'll take any help you can give me. Thank you. | March Poems | Pat | 12 | 676 | Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:40 pm by Pat |
| | | This is girlie, but I think you guys can handle it. Can you understand it? | Feb Poems | Pat | 4 | 395 | Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:22 am by Pat |
| | | My goal here is to communicate that I find nurturing in these books. Help! | 2012 January Poems | Pat | 4 | 426 | Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:26 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | I Don't Buy Tickets, But | Pat | Pat | 2 | 916 | Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:08 pm by Pat |
| | | The Triplets (or Triplets) : limited by characters accepted | Pat | Pat | 2 | 1188 | Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:40 am by Pat |