| | | I like the sounds in this poem. Is the content clear? | July Poems | tsukany | 2 | 420 | Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:38 pm by Pat |
| | | I am trying a new approach to details in this poem. | June Poem | tsukany | 6 | 486 | Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:22 pm by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Are there enough stanza breaks? Is the format inviting because of the large blocks of text? | May Poems | tsukany | 3 | 411 | Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:00 pm by Pat |
| | | Working on the tone of this one. What help can you offer to it? | April Poems | tsukany | 2 | 444 | Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:02 am by Pat |
| | | Since I can't figure out how to email everyone | March Poems | tsukany | 1 | 823 | Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:47 pm by Pat |
| | | Working still with sound within lines | March Poems | tsukany | 3 | 422 | Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:39 am by Dewell H. Byrd |
| | | Spring Action. Working on showing not telling. | Feb Poems | tsukany | 3 | 469 | Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:49 am by Pat |
| | | Looking at double meaning and a satisfying conclusion. | 2012 January Poems | tsukany | 3 | 987 | Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:22 pm by tsukany |
| | | Working on humor. Are the jumps too broad to follow? | Todd | tsukany | 1 | 1014 | Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:10 pm by Pat |
| | | Sept Poem "Looking Up" I am experimenting with line length in this one. I have been inspied by John Leax of late, with his short lines. | Todd | tsukany | 2 | 1102 | Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:04 pm by tsukany |
| | | "Walking" I am still thinking about the sounds of the words in the lines. I need to find a way to preserve my indents and spacing. :( | Todd | tsukany | 7 | 1007 | Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:21 pm by tsukany |
| | | Seasoned for a Contest "I still need help with the 'music' of each line" | Todd | tsukany | 3 | 1091 | Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:57 pm by Velvet F |
| | | "The Inspirational Stuff" This poem's format is intentional. It should "flow" with different font sizes and margins. | Todd | tsukany | 3 | 1674 | Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:09 pm by Velvet F |
| | | The Last Friday (I am working on the "music" of the lines as they are read aloud) | Todd | tsukany | 5 | 1048 | Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:01 am by Guest |